Androids

The drawing overall is great in shading lighting and proportions, and using your own style of drawing brings out the characters more than the original art style. The feeling it gives off is like the androids are glaring at the viewer as if they were going to attack them, or at least 17 and 18 look like that. Two things that I think would make it a little better is using two birds rather than one perching on 16's clothes, and having 17 and 18 use their hands for doing something. And maybe showing the Red Ribbon army symbol on 17 wouldn't have been so bad either, since it will make them look more like a group, since 16's and 18's symbol are visible. But overall the drawing is great!